I need some beta readers. For pony fanfic, so if that's not your thing, that's fine. (Focused on Rarity, if that matters.)
Anybody up for it? Lemme know, I'll toss you a link to the story. It's short for me, a bit under 5k words. :) I'm looking for any kind of critique you want to give: just saying you liked (or didn't like) it, typo spotting, or more in-depth analysis. Mostly, mind, I just want to make sure there's nothing embarrassingly bad in it before I release it to the world. :) It might reach a slightly bigger audience than I'm used to, since the pony fan works sites are pretty active right now, and that has me paranoid.