Beta readers again?

I'd like opinions on a new fic. I have a prologue and one chapter, about 7k words total.

Catch is this time it's a crossover. FiM X Heralds of Valdemar. It *should* make at least minimal sense without having read/watched either, but it may be only minimal, I'm not really sure. Ideally somebody who is a fan of both could give it a look for me.

Anybody who's up for it can get tossed a link. I'm trying out fimfiction.com so it's hosted over there right now, though I can move it to google docs if you prefer.

I should post this here too, I guess

If you get it take a geek point. :) And yes, it's a terrible pun. I'm sorry. But once I had the idea, it had to be done.

This has nothing to do with Disney, My Little Pony, Newgrounds, or anything else at all in any way. It relates to two things only: Companions, and cubes. (Yes that's a hint. If you don't get it now, you probably lack the correct referents.)