I like it a lot! I like the pose of the dragon, and the girls' hand.
Quicktip, however. Her arm's looking a little weird for me, and is pulling some sort of impossible maneuver. Instead of making the forearm a straight, horizontal line, perhaps bend it down a little. Like....argh idk how to explain without showing you. XDD SORRY. Just the placement of her arm seems strange, that's all bb. But the rest is wonderful.
Ah, now that you mention it, (and now that I try that position myself) you're right. You can't really hold your arm like that without effort, if it were limp as t should be it'd be angled a bit differently. Thanks! (Sadly moving it means her hand is going to probably end up crappy, I never can draw a good hand twice...)
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Date: 2010-10-04 08:34 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-10-04 02:33 pm (UTC)Quicktip, however. Her arm's looking a little weird for me, and is pulling some sort of impossible maneuver. Instead of making the forearm a straight, horizontal line, perhaps bend it down a little. Like....argh idk how to explain without showing you. XDD SORRY.
Just the placement of her arm seems strange, that's all bb.
But the rest is wonderful.
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Date: 2010-10-04 02:40 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-10-04 02:47 pm (UTC)Hugh, I can't draw anything good twice. :( So I totally understand the pain of moving something. D: